Saturday 10 May 2014

Hollie's 100 WC


One day there was two children who were playing a game. One of the children was called Sam and the other Emily. Emily threw the ball at Sam to hit. However Sam hit the ball hit so hard he smashed the window. Suddenly the both shrank because the ball had hit the button on their dad’s shrink ray. Their mum and dad were looking for Sam and Emily they looked everywhere. It was a long night cold night in the garden, when they woke Sam and Emily was shocked to find a large scary bubble bee. Shock changed to upset when they discovered it was hurt.

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  1. I like the way your characters show compassion for the bee at the of your 100WC. I'm also intrigued as to why their Dad had a shrink ray?! I wish my Dad had one- that would be amazing. Well done, keep up the good work.
    Fiona (Team 100WC)

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  2. Well done Hollie.You had a good think about this story.

    By Chloe

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